Thursday, March 31, 2011

Where It All Began

The assignment was to write about an Unlikely Friendship. This is Aaron Dean's entry.

She made sure to take her bramble wood basket and tie on her evening bonnet as she left the shack that morning as she planned to be out all day and may get caught in the cold wood at night. Sister Haggis was brewing her hideous Flak Juice potion and it always threw her into a frenzy. The less she was anywhere nearby the better. All of those incantations and delicate ingredients and on ordinary days Sister Haggis was likely to strike her at least once. On Flak Juice days it would be often.

A hefty bramble wood basket such as the one she carried could be used as a weapon in a pinch, with its interior loaded with the clutching thorns of the bramble wood tree. And you never knew what you would come across in the wood.

She hopped onto the lane and hurried through the sunlight, clutching her black shift and heavy shawl around her scrawny frame. She felt exposed in the sunlight, and had to go too near other homes with their windows full of prying eyes. Her tight black braids slapped her back like a carriage person, whipping her and urging her on. Her black shoes were beaten and worn yet utilitarian; they served their purpose as a means of conveyance.

She could see the dark confines of the wood and almost feel its inky coolness when a form inadvertently stepped in her path. She stopped abruptly, quite nearly toppling upon the stranger. It was a child, no more than 4 years old with a basket of her own made of the finest wicker. She could see that the young one had been collecting vilden berries along the path, for their neon green hue stained the little girl’s white frock and ran down her chin. She was eating more than she could collect, it seemed.

The little child looked up the lanky, dark frame, reached the face and let out a shriek of terror so intense it hurt the other child’s ears. The little one dumped her basket and ran straight home, leaving the sickening sweet scent of vilden berries in her stead. The other child watched her go, tried not to be stung by the rebuff of one so young and flung herself into the safety of the wood where the trees and wild things always welcomed her and none of them shrieked and ran away.

By the time she was no more than a few paces into the wood, she loosened the braids and let her long black hair flow free behind like a shiny flag as she skipped down the lane. She loved to feel it flowing free behind her, though polite etiquette ruled against it. Truth be told her benefactress would be mortified by her appearance.

She knew of a sunny knoll right along the riverbank that seemed untouched by anyone’s hands but hers. It had become her secret place to be alone and lounge in quiet reflection. She loved to stare at the sun dappling on the water, though she knew better than to ever go too near it or touch it as she was fiercely allergic.

She was lying propped against a rock on a bed of river grass and nearly dozing when she heard the scampering and mewing in the bushes nearby. She laughed briefly and smiled. She meant to check before she settled down. It seemed the grabbler had gotten another one. The grabbler was harmless enough if you knew to skirt around it or feed it lilac berries. But if it were hungry or cranky it would snatch any passing living thing within its dark branches and hold them there until it was fed again. Probably a farm cat or rabbit or some other poor creature was tangled within.

She wandered down closer to the banks and gathered a handful of lilac berries. She tossed them to the grabbler and a tawny blur came scuttling out and cringed near her shoes. She laughed and bent to the kitten only to realize in shock that it was a lion cub, tiny and a bit scrawny and definitely trembling all over.

“Poor little thing,” she murmured as she picked it up. She looked into the creatures deep, brown terrified eyes and held it close to her to cease its trembling. “Have you lost your mother?”

“If you please, strange child,” the cub said, in a squeaky little voice. “I have no mother and was out wandering the banks when that hideous bush snatched me. It seems I am constantly being attacked and prodded in this wood and it terrifies me greatly. Now I fear that a strange, green child like you is a witch and will stew me up in a pot for your dinner, quick as a wink.”

“Silly little foundling,” the girl laughed. “I am no more a witch than you are, and as for my color I was born this way, and mean you no harm whatsoever. As for what I enjoy for dinner I know that a scrawny thing like you would not fill me up in the slightest. Furthermore, why do you tremble so? Are you not aware that you are destined to be King of All Beasts someday? Why the grabbler would have loosed you immediately if you had simply let out your mighty roar.”

The cub hid his eyes in shame. “My roar is far from mighty, little miss, I assure you.”

“Let’s hear it then,” the child prodded.

The little lion trembled and then let out a tremulous little squawk that did not startle even the little bluebirds hopping nearby.

The girl laughed and said “Are there no other lions to show you how it’s done? What of your father, then, and your family?”

“I’m afraid of them,” the cub quaked.

They spent the afternoon getting to know each other, and many afternoons thereafter. In fact, the little lion cub became the joy and purpose of the little green child’s life for a time. She tried to work on building up the cowardly little creature’s nerve, but something always seemed to startle him away from learning.

By mid-summer he had grown a bit more robust and could manage to frighten the little bluebirds with his pathetic roar, but some wicked little monkeys took up roost in a tree nearby and teased the animal relentlessly. They threw bits of earth at him and sneaked down to pull his tail when his back was turned. They destroyed any progress the child made.

Just when the air began to smell of acrid smoke and the wind grew cooler the child determined that she must do something to help the little lion cub. Her benefactress Sister Haggis was a witch, after all. Surely there was a courage potion she could concoct.

The girl was unsure of many of the ingredients and their exact measure may have been off a little, but a potion she did produce. Sister Haggis watched in great good humor as the little green girl hurried off into the wood to give her potion to the lion. It was an amusement to her and she greatly anticipated what result there would be.

The little lion had taken up residence in a little cave the two had found one afternoon and had made quite a home for himself. He had a bed of fine leaves and even a tiny running trickle to drink fresh water from. He ate mostly leaves and berries for her was far too fearful to approach and kill any game, even tiny birds and bunnies.

He was also fearful of the potion.

“What do I do with it?” the lion asked, looking at the murky bottle with distaste. “Must I drink it?”

The girl looked at the bottle uncertainly. “I believe so. You just swallow it up, quick as a wink.”

She poured the murky liquid into a little wooden saucer and placed it in front of the lion. They both watched as the liquid swirled and sparked, reacting to the wooden bowl.

The lion approached it and sniffed, then snorted in disgust.

“I am afraid I cannot consume that vile stuff for it makes my stomach turn so terribly. Get it away and I will go on being cowardly.”

Just then, the monkeys descended once more and threw rocks and clods of dirt at the lion. One of them dashed forward to tweak his ears and upended the bowl, dashing the liquid on the little green girl, from head to foot.

She screamed and fell back out of the cave as the potion soaked her. Sparks covered her frame in a blue haze for a moment and when she stood again, she was enraged. A drastic change had come over the little girl. She was furious and hot anger and hatred coursed through her. And power. Such fearsome, awesome power.

She turned and let out a cry of terrifying rage at the horde of mischievous monkeys. Sparks flew from her fingertips and danced in her eyes. She shouted words she did not understand and a bolt shot from her right hand and covered the monkeys in white lightning. When the smoke cleared, they had sprouted large, floppy wings.

The little girl had become evil. The lion cub had dashed into the woods, more terrified than ever.

The power surged through the green girls lanky frame. She cared not for the departing lion cub. She wanted revenge on all of those who had ever dared cross her. She had been filled with more courage and power than any little girl needed, and that had made her Wicked.

She headed home, looking for Sister Haggis.

Worst Memory


Maleficent

by Aaron D. Johnson

I am four years old and always climb into Mommy and Daddy’s bed in the early morning hours. I fall asleep between them and feel safe and comfortable in their big bed. On Saturdays and Sundays, when Daddy doesn’t have to work he and I lay there reading the paper. He looks at the tiny print and the small words; I look at the funny pages. I mimic the expression on his face and pretend to understand the big words and the colorful panels. Though they are called the funny papers, I never laugh.

Mommy and Daddy don’t talk to each other at all. They only talk to me. I don’t like that. I don’t know why they aren’t happy living in our big house on Empire Lane way at the top of the hill. It’s the nicest place I have ever lived. I have Brandon and Roberta to play with and my big sisters Kelly and Tammy have their friends too. They even play with me sometimes though I don’t understand their games. They always want to play “Little House” and there is always a blizzard coming. It never actually gets here, but its coming. To me, it’s boring. I like to run and play outside. Nothing is better than running barefoot through the warm grass and playing games with my friends. When I whine and cry they give me the big hardcover Disney book and I sit in Daddy’s big chair and look at all the pictures, except that one with the witch from “Sleeping Beauty”. She scares me with her horns on her head. I peek once or twice and then am terrified that night in my big boy bed, turning the light on and looking underneath for her.

Tammy isn’t happy either. She spends a lot of time in her room and the cats go in her room and poop on the floor and she doesn’t clean it up. Her room and her clothes are a mess. When she and Kelly fight I take Kelly’s side because Kelly’s room is big and nice and clean and she has a big glowing thing with lights that flashes when you talk to it or play music. Kelly is always playing music.

Tammy and Kelly don’t fight with me, just with each other. But their fights are bad. I don’t like when they fight. Tammy fights with Mommy too.

One night, Mommy tells Tammy to give me a bath because I had been outside playing with Brandon and gotten “dirty and grubby”. Tammy fights with Mommy because she wants to be alone in her room, not washing her dirty brother. Tammy brings me upstairs to the bathroom to wash my hair. She puts me in the tub and gets my hair wet, then soaps it all up. I’m afraid of getting soap in my eyes so most of the time they are closed, but when I look at Tammy I see her eyes are red like she has been crying. She turns the water on at the other end of the tub and feels it, then turns it off. My foot goes down there and a drop hits me and it burns and I laugh. Who would ever want water that hot?

Tammy turns me and lays me down under the faucet to wash the soap out of my hair. She turns the faucet on and all that hot water goes all over me. I scream at the top of my lungs. I am burning and cooking alive. I never knew water could be so hot or hurt so bad.

Tammy is beaten really badly by Mommy right in front of me and Tammy cries. My head is hot where the water was. I sit in Daddy’s big chair with the Disney book looking at the pictures again. I look right at that mean witch with the horns. She’s not so scary now. She’s just a picture.

Animal Main Character

The instructions for this one were simple. Your main character is a female animal protecting her young from a real or perceived threat. My interpretation:

Cold World

She pokes her big shaggy head out of the snowdrift and shakes. She snuffles and blinks in the bright morning air. The blast of frozen wind that pummels her, tosses fresh snow into the air from atop her gigantic head and forms a prism of brilliant color against the sea of white on white. Her enormous paws crest the top of the drift and lift her form out of the rank confines of the den below. Plaintive chuffing and mewing reaches her sensitive ears from below and she at last pulls herself free and topples down the steep embankment, stretching as she slides.

She toboggans down the rise stretching and scratching, gloriously free of the warm burrow, enormous paws in the air, rubbing her back against the crusty permafrost, scratching a four month itch. Her muscles feel cramped and weak after such little use. It has been four months, buried in the embankment with her young; four months that have been all about them. She takes these first moments only for herself; the glory of being free in the fresh Arctic air and chilly sunshine.

Back atop the embankment two tiny heads poke out of the hole. They blink and whine, knowing they must follow, but for the moment taking in the sights around them with paralytic terror. They have never seen nor imagined a place as amazingly vast and empty and large and cold as this could exist. Their whole lives have been each other, Mama and the cozy, dark burrow. Their first steps are tentative and clumsy and they whine in anger and frustration as they slip and slide, their paws not big enough to be snowshoes, their claws still fragile and tender and so new.

At the bottom of the embankment, Mama hears their fretting and makes a low rumbling bark in her throat to signal them. They must follow. It’s the first true test of what will be many in the months and years to come. She cannot scramble to the top and collect them. If they don’t follow, they will starve and die.

When their next steps are met by even more slipping and sliding, the whining cubs eventually tumble down the hill, propelled by instinctive need and terror, but also by the sheer force of gravity. Their tiny forms collide with her massive one, and they hurriedly scramble atop her warm solid mass and begin to nurse.

As she feels her young feed, she lifts her shaggy head and sniffs, taking in the surroundings. She has a nose so sensitive it can detect a seal taking a breath at an air hole from many miles away. She can also smell if any of her own kind is nearby as well, for they pose a danger to the helpless cubs more than almost anything, besides starvation.

Later in the day, the wind shifts and she senses trouble. Something is not right. The air is much warmer than it should be, and the sea, many miles journey to the West seems closer than normal. In a short while she and the cubs must begin their journey to the sea, many hundreds of miles away. It is a long and treacherous jaunt, but she must replenish her fat stores as she has lost more than half her body weight caring for them over the long months of winter. It has been many months since she has had sustenance of any kind. The last of her fat reserves was used to provide milk for the cubs.

They must leave soon if the cubs are to survive. She must reach the sea ice to hunt for seals and with the shortened winters, the hunting season is likewise shortened.

Later that night, with the cubs safely ensconced in the den, she climbs to the highest peak around, literally clawing her way to the icy reaches. She sniffs the wind and chuffs in discomfort. She has an excellent, almost preternatural sense of the weather and its many moods and changes. A storm is coming. A true Arctic blizzard is heading their way. It may delay their journey by a week or more. Though she could brave such a storm, she knows that the cubs would surely perish if wandering and exposed on the open plains. Their journey must wait.

She shuffles down the mountain, back to the den. The next morning, the blizzard is howling outside, and the den is once again enclosed in blackness.

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Two weeks later, their slow, ambling journey begins. The cubs do not know that they will never see the cozy den or the familiar embankment again and that the journey will be perilous and long. They only know they must follow Mama wherever she goes.

Mama wanders ahead, her head tossing from side to side, always sampling the air, testing the weather and being certain none of her own kind are about. A male of her own kind would attack and eat the cubs and she would be near helpless to protect them in her current condition. Meeting one would be disaster.

Their journey is diverted several times when she senses one near. They spend the frigid nights in rocky outcroppings and abandoned caves far from where foraging males tend to wander. Her sleep is restless, her ears always alert. One night, she hears the thudding, shotgun booms of the ice cracking in the distance. The sea shore is much closer than she had anticipated and this worries her. The best hunting is on the ice fields.

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The next day, they reach the ice fields. Her familiar hunting ground is gone. This barren place of cracked floes and icy peaks is not suitable hunting territory at all. Furthermore, the ground is far too unstable and the cubs have not developed the thick, coarse fur that is necessary for them to swim yet.

She has only one chance. Her instinct to feed and her instinct to nurture the cubs are battling within her. Everything within tells her that food lays in the direction of the sea, somewhere off in the distance. They will all die if she doesn’t find it. She does the only thing she can.

She dives. She swims.


The Plane

This one was to take place entirely on a plane. Here is my interpretation:

Jackson watched the water lap at the wings. It seemed a little higher. He sighed, turned to Lana.

“You know, the part I can’t understand is that no one saw this coming. I mean, I always believed in ESP but not one person on board had the slightest clue. It was a shock to all of us.”

“I knew,” Lana replied. “But I picture the plane I’m on crashing to the ground every time I’m on one. There wasn’t all that much special about this time.”

She gazed at the endless expanse of blue around her. It lay flat and broken as far as the eye could see. It would be beautiful and peaceful under ordinary circumstances.

She laughed.

“What’s funny?” Jackson asked.

“I’m just thinking of how much people pay for a view like we’ve got in fancy hotels. We’re lucky, ya know.”

Jackson tried to smile. He adjusted the makeshift cover over his head and glanced at the sun. A few more hours of hiding from the heat and then it was back to freezing.

“So we’re pretty sure this is Lake Superior, right?” Lana asked.

“It’s definitely fresh water because we’ve tasted it and there are only a few lakes big enough in the US that are this enormous.”

“I still say it’s a good thing. I mean, there’s more of a chance of someone finding us in the middle of a lake. And at least we won’t go out like those abandoned scuba divers in that movie.”

Jackson winced. “You promised me you would NEVER bring that up.”

“Sorry. It’s the delirium talking, I guess.”

“And anyway we don’t know what’s going on back on land. We don’t even know why we’re here and how we survived while everyone else –-“

“I know. I know.”

They sat in silence. The vessel bobbed on the water for a moment. Jackson stared at the sun-dappled waves in the distance, hoping against hope for a speck of life or movement or anything.

“What place can you think of that’s worse than this?” Lana asked.

“Huh?”

“I mean, think of somewhere that this is a good alternative to.”

Jackson laughed. “Not sure. I’m definitely glad I don’t have to go to work every day. Some parts of real life really suck. And I’d rather be stranded out here bobbing in the middle of a lake than at work. Or in a really boring college class that I’m forced to take.”

“I’m glad I’m not at a baby shower,” Lana offered. “Baby showers really blow. I mean, I can’t even pretend that I enjoy them. Also not really a fan of weddings especially if it’s one of people I barely know. You know, one of those obligatory weddings.”

“I’ve got it! The dentist. A really painful dentist visit where you just know you’re going to get the drill at some point.”

“Yeah. You got me there. The sound of that drill. Yeesh.”

It was a game they played. It seemed to boost their spirits and pass the time, though neither of them knew exactly what, if anything, they were waiting for. If they really thought too long and hard about their situation, they would lose all hope.

The craft beneath them bubbled. It had happened several times before, but this time it was more loud and insistent than before. It shook them back to reality as it listed to the left.

Lana sighed. “You’re sure about the water temperature, right? You’re absolutely sure?”

Jackson nodded. “If this is Lake Superior it’s in the 50s year-round, even in the summer. You just can’t swim in it for very long without some kind of protective gear. I mean, you never hear about people taking a refreshing dip in Lake Superior.”

An hour later and the sun was lower. They watched a school of fish swim past, followed by some dark shape hunting them. These moments were few and far between, but there was something comforting about the natural order of things going on, however unnatural their circumstances were.

The plane beneath them gurgled and listed more sharply than it had yet. Lana shrieked. Jackson looked at her, saw the naked fear on her face for the first time. They both stood.

She leaned against him and he put his arms around her. She felt so frail and tiny, especially compared to the endless expanse around them.

“Where do you wish you were right now?” Jackson asked. “At this moment if you could be anywhere?”

Lana looked him in the face and smiled. “At home with you, watching really bad TV and not thinking about going anywhere for a long time. And you?”

Jackson smiled as the plane gurgled and sank.

“Same place.”